Design criticism · Measure P
The Vote No on Measure P logo: black condensed capitals reading N O, a small boxed lowercase on, and a P, on a yellow field above a black bar.
The Vote No organization's mark, reproduced for criticism.

Noon P.

A shaving cream company worked out how to make people read a sign from a moving car. The organization opposing Measure P has worked out the opposite.

In the fall of 1925, a Minneapolis lawyer named Clinton Odell put two hundred dollars behind his son Allan’s idea: one line of verse on each of six small boards, staked a hundred feet apart along a highway out of Minneapolis. Five carried the poem. The sixth carried the name. You could not read one without reading them all.

The signs ran until 1963. Speed finished them — interstates pushed the boards back from the pavement and cars got faster, until six signs stopped being something a family could read together on the way past.

The lesson outlived the product. A sign gets about one second. Whatever it says in that second is what it says.

The first five boards are ours. The sixth is theirs, reproduced unaltered in the slot where Burma-Shave put its name. The yellow behind all six is sampled from their site at #F4D24C.

Read it fast

One caveat first. What is examined here is a web logo — the file the campaign serves on its own homepage. Left there, it is a header image. But these marks rarely stay put. They become the placard, the yard sign, the mailer, the banner on the folding table outside the market. Then they have to survive being read at speed. Everything below assumes that trip.

NO. A small boxed on. Then P. A moving eye does not stop at word boundaries; it takes the plate whole. What it takes is NOONP — a yellow placard with a little word wedged between two letters, which is the shape of a curb restriction. On a parking measure, that is hard to unsee.

The one part of the mark that argues rather than commands — the tagline in the black bar — is examined separately in Six words in the black bar.

The color is not decoration

Yellow and black is the loudest pairing the human eye can process. Sampled from the campaign’s own site, their yellow against black clears 14.17 to 1. That is superb visibility — and exactly why the combination is reserved for caution tape, lane closures and wet floors.

South Dakota once barred red from roadside signs because red belonged to official warning notices, so Burma-Vita printed a white-on-blue run for that state alone. States have understood for a century that sign color carries authority. Choose the hazard palette and the sign has said hazard before anyone reads a word.

At sea it says something sharper

In Brown’s 1916 code of signals, the flag quartered yellow and black — Lima — announced dangerous infectious disease aboard. The meaning held through the 1923 and 1931 editions, and marine supply shops still sell it as the quarantine flag.

Two colors. One message. Stay back.

What the sign never says

The ballot title is the Downtown Parking Plazas Ordinance. The word parking appears nowhere in the mark. The tagline argues about what ought to be built downtown; the measure asks who decides what happens to land the city already owns. Two different questions, and the sign says neither one out loud.

Everything in it is a negative

NO is the first word. STOP is the call to action on the homepage. The only affirmative statement in the design — downtown needs people, people need homes — is set in two lines inside a black bar, at a fraction the height of NO, and it is gone by the time the mark is browser-tab size. Strip the yellow for a one-color print run and what is left is a black box on a black box.

A sign that commands is not a sign that persuades

Burma-Shave’s method was the opposite of an order. No demand, no imperative — a joke that took six boards to land, and a reader who came along willingly because the last board was worth the wait. Odell was selling shaving cream to people with every right to ignore him, and he knew it.

The campaign against Measure P has put its money into a plate that issues an instruction, in the palette reserved for hazards, on a subject it declines to name.

Sources and method

  • Burma-Shave. Clinton Odell, a Minneapolis lawyer, backed his son Allan’s idea with $200; the first sets went up on highways out of Minneapolis in the fall of 1925, six boards spaced roughly a hundred feet apart, five carrying a line of verse and the sixth the brand name. The signs ran until 1963, when the company passed to Philip Morris and the campaign was discontinued. Sources: MNopedia, Minnesota Historical Society; Legends of America; contemporary trade accounts. Some accounts date the first installed sets to 1926.
  • The South Dakota run. State law reserved red for official warning notices, so a white-on-blue series was printed for that state alone. Red with white lettering was the most common livery elsewhere; orange and blue runs also existed.
  • The signal flag.
    L — Lima
    The 1916 International Code of Signals lists L — Lima — as a square flag quartered yellow and black, denoting “I have or had some dangerous, infectious disease on board.” The meaning continued in the 1923 and 1931 editions and is no longer current; marine suppliers still market the Lima design as a quarantine flag. Sources: Brown’s Signalling, 1916, as reproduced at earlyradiohistory.us; current marine supply catalogue listings. The flag is drawn here to that description — yellow at the upper hoist and lower fly — in a conventional signal yellow, not sampled from any campaign material.
  • Color and contrast. The yellow was sampled directly from pixels on the campaign’s website at #F4D24C. Its contrast against black is 14.17 to 1, computed to the WCAG relative-luminance formula and independently recalculated for this piece.
  • The mark. The logo analyzed here is the image served on the campaign’s own homepage, filed as Logo_TCX_MenloParkHC2_RGB_Final.png. The homepage call to action reads “Help Us STOP Measure P.” The mark is reproduced here for purposes of criticism and comment and remains the property of its owner.
  • The ballot title. Downtown Parking Plazas Ordinance — see the City Attorney’s impartial analysis, posted at Resources.